On the Street:

Friend 1: so which life do you choice?

Me: I don’t know! (Panicking)

Friend 2: leave him alone. He isn't about it.

Friend 3: nor am i!

(both sets of friends walk opposite ways)

Friend 4 & 5 & 6: (look at each-other confused) 

(Rap begins to play in the back ground as there's a transition to day to night)(Non diegetic music)



Basketball Practice night: 

(Diegetic sound of music turns into non diegetic) 

Me: Pass!! (Loudly, trying to get space)

Friend 3: He’s open get him!(aggressively)

Friend 5: Here! (Throws the ball) Shot!!!
(Swish sound of the net)

Friend 4: Yo you lot where are the others? 


Night time on road:

(diegetic sound of cars and speaking)

Friend 1: ay man! look at all this money!

Friend 2: Look at our big moves! forget basketball

Thugs: yh g forget basketball make money with us!


(montage of different events which occur with non-diegetic music over the footage! slow pace editing to start of the narrative which leads to fast pace showing the problem that happens with the other friends on road)


Group 1 (walking past group 2 staring at them)

Group2 (looks back)

Friend1: look at these low lives, playing basketball. (Laughing)

Friend 3: Trust me! Bloody jokers (jokingly)

Me: What did you say? (Angrily)

Friend 3: Nothing bigman. (Sarcastically)

On the Court
Group 1: (random shouting)

Friend 4: I’m captain

Me: same 

Friend 5: we'll pick our numbers (move away from friend 4 and me)

Group1: We're ready 

(Door opens)

Me: Look who’s here! Why are you here?!(Confused and annoyed)

Group2: Thought we'd come play for old times’ sake... 

Friend 4: are we stupid? After everything you’ve said to us(disgusted) 
 Friend 3: Listen... (Loudly)

Montage

On the street

Friend 1: Yo chase him! Get him g quickly.

Friend 3: (clenches the knife) 

Black screen

Run!!! 

Screaming in the back ground for help!

All the friends link up

Friend 1, 3, 6: we've messed up big-time!

Friend 1: he tried stealing the packs (worried)

Friend 3: i had to shank him! (Panicking)

Friend 6: I know it’s bad! but sh*t happens but it shouldn’t have ended like that 

Friend 1: stop stressing!

Me: did you dash the knife and cleaned off the blood?!

Friend 1: Yeah! i don’t know if i should stay in this life style?
(Heavy breathing)

me: see what i mean? Don’t worry we'll sort this out!

Friend 4: yeah together we will. Make sure nothing comes back to you lot.

Goes and chats to the elders and made sure they sorted it with the others as it was instant reaction due to getting robbed.

Ending:
All of them: Let’s Do This! (Goes onto basketball court)

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