Create a new blogpost called 'Ignite presentation learner response'

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each category. 
11 out of 20 

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2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write a detailed WWW and EBI for your own coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

 WWW:
  1. understood the target market
  2. well explained demographics 
  3. enigma codes explained
  4. mise en scene was good
  5. presented well, didnt read off the board
  6. detail of poster and trailer
  7. good use of slides
  8. good comparison of films
  9. well thought out narrative 
  10. well constructed
EBI:

  1. add more pictures
  2. use more media theorists 
  3. dont use slang "stabbed up"
  4. be more formal
  5. add more colour to the slides 
  6. make the slides more interesting 
3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your narrative offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Does it fit the genre you are aiming for? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others?


 my presentation has helped me develop my idea and how to understand different ways on how to display my message/ concept . my slideshow did fit the genre and the audience understood why i had picked coming of age and the message behind it. my statement of intent does reflect on my presentation as all the conventions that are in it are displayed in my statement of intent and how things will come together. however, i couldve mentioned more theorists to my presentation and how it will become better due to the theories and how it will all fall into place 

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