Editing Task:Video + Script + Story Board




Nickholi : ( takes out phone) " yo.. i'm here"
 Aranjit : "yo you good ?"
Nickholi : " yeah  g you "
Aranjit : "you have that yeah?"
Nickholi : " yeah i got that "
Aranjit : ( opens bag and brings out a package )" this what you wanted yeah? "
Nickholi : " nah still... this isn't what i wanted bro"
Aranjit : " what do you mean??? what did you want then "
Nickholi : A track suit... what is this ? i didnt want a hoodie"
Aranjit : (Aggressively) " this is what you ordered! dont lie "
Nickholi : " nah it isnt what i ordered bro"
Aranjit :" but i got that for you next day what do you mean you didnt order this??"
Nickoli : " nah still... i didnt order this. and it wasnt even a next thing g stop lying.... you took 3 - 4 days "
Aranjit : (in-denial) " nah... Saturday and Sunday dont count bro"
Nickholi : "youre some jokeman..."
Aranjit : "but... i know you want it i can tell... you might aswell take it"
Nickholi : " nah still."
Aranjit : " so i got 5 just for you and you dont even want it... "
Nickholi : " yeah but it isnt what i ordered so...."
Aranjit : "just for you ill give it to you for a nice price... and next order 10% extra off just for you"
Nickholi : " i'll thin about it g... "
(Nickholi leaves the room)
Aranjit : (picks up phone) " yo...he didnt buy it... he's waffling **** . do you know what? shall i shank him? say nothing g" (runs out to chase nickholi)
*To Be Continued*




Match on action through the doors.
Pan when walking up the stairs 
Over the shoulder when walking.
Pov when walking 
Close up of shoes / low angle shot of stairs 
Medium shot when coming up the stairs 
Tilt when answering the phone 

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