Star persona video feedback 3 videos

1) Watch three videos from the three students below you in the blog list (use the blog links to the side of the Year 12 blog). For each one, write their name, a WWW and EBI highlighting the strengths and weaknesses.
BLAISE 
WWW: the speed of the footage is good as it isnt too fast or slow. the fast pace instrumental syncs in with the footage and makes it exciting. the make up was good as theyve made it realistic. 
EBI: there was too much negative space. the portrait capturing of the footage shoudlve been landscape. the lighting was from behind.

DEANDRE 
WWW: the make up was perfect and displays the theme you wanted which was a horror one. the footage is quite detailed and showed all the steps on how to get that certain look. the music wasn't too fast which made it fit in with your music as it flowed with the footage.
EBI: the lighting wasnt good as it was from behind meaning it didnt show much detail.there was quite alot of negative spacing at the top of the footage which didnt make the model in focus. the video foot shouldve been captured in a portrait angle.

 DEVESH
WWW:  the footage syncs with the music as both are really fast paced and doesnt slow down. the makeup was good as it seems professional.
EBI: it was a continuous shot meaning there was alot of unnecessary footage taken place which couldve been deleted. the footage couldve been closer so the viewer can see what shes doing as shes far away.




2) Ask the students assessing your work to email you their WWW/EBI feedback and paste it into your LR blogpost. Do you agree with their feedback?
  
i agree with their feed back as its places where i can work on to make my production much better and have a stronger concept to display my ideas.

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